Thursday, January 27, 2011

A new life on Earth


Like water n seed,
They work together,
With the wind n earth,
to give rise to another
Life on earth,
to give birth
to a tree.

When man and wife,
Come close together,
After dates n flirt,
To bring another,
Life on earth,
to give a birth
to a man.

In the nest is an egg,
Guarded by feathers,
From the wind and sun,
The torrid weathers,
And the shells open,
its another one,
New life on Earth,
Its again a birth
of a bird.

Its a miracle on Earth,
How a new life takes birth,
It makes our life
Full of worth.


Comments?

1 comment:

  1. sry......bt i didn't find it gd.....
    i think dat derez a lack of co-herence in dis poetry of urs.....
    try 2 improve k..
    :):)

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