Thursday, July 22, 2010

Abhi bhi baki hai kuch samay

Abhi bhi baki hai kuch samay,
Ladte jaa anth na aaye jab tak,
Suraj sirf badal me chupa hai,
Raat nahi aayi hai ab tak.

Manzil ab paas hai,
Ab haath na utha lena,
Bas chalta jaa raah pe,
Apne kadam badhate rehna.

4 comments:

  1. its a lovely n awesmest poetry bhaiya.
    SERIOUSLY ITS VRY MOTIVATING N INSPIRATIONAL POETRY!!!!
    :)

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  2. Thank You Nikki... :D You inspired me for a hindi write...

    So tane credit aapu chu..
    Bas tari maate gujarati ma reply.. :)

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  3. u mean mjhe gujrati mein reply krna hai?
    itni nhi aati bhaiya. :(

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  4. Nahi behna..
    Mera matlab tha ki main tere liye esp. Gujju mein comment kar raha hoon..

    Tune mujhe inspire kiya hindi mein likhne ko, isliye tujhe credit de raha hoon!! :D

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