Friday, July 23, 2010

A rainy day... barish ka ek din..

Is dharti ki khusboo maan ko hai bhati,
aur saanso mein khushi si bas jaati,
Bhura hua rang is mitti ka,
Bheegon ne hume tu jo chali aati.

Patton pe saje os ki boondein,
Apne pyaar ko yehh panchi doondhein,
Khushiyo se bhar gaya hai yeh jahan,
Le lo mazza, aankho ko moondein.

Lovers sitting together,
Cuddling up each other,
Spreading love, kissing,
they thank this weather.

Par ek kone me baithi ek jaan hai,
Na mann kahi uska, na kahi dhyaan hai,
nakaam pyaar me thi woh udas,
Tute hue saare uske armaan hai.

There is love spread everywhere,
And the beauty of naturely care,
Only few have wrong reasons to bless rain,
as they hide their lonely tears of pain.

4 comments:

  1. awesme asesme asesme!!!!!!
    well well well!!!!
    its a g88888 poetry in hinglish bhaiya.
    LUVED IT TOO MCH!!!
    :)

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  2. thank you thank you thank you!!!

    SO much Nikki...
    Behna tere comments make my day yaar!! :D
    Thanks so much!! :D I am so happy!!

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  3. hi darsh
    very nice blog, its easy to navigate, and not straining to look at. well designed.

    nice writes too, have given my comments about them already, as u know,

    keep up the good work, keep penning
    -vicky

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  4. Hey thank you Vicky..
    Well got the design idea from Dolly's blog... never knew blogs could be customised before I saw her's.. :)

    Yes.. Vicky you have on most already.. :D and very thankful for that.

    Thanks again.. :)

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